14 August 2005

loose ends

I’ve got so many loose ends hanging around these days I’m dropping words on the ground getting caught up in shoelaces where kiss and miss become mass devastation if anyone even bothers to look

they sizzle and pop when stepped on

my loose ends; his regrets my, loosen his regrets it all comes down to the fact that
I am completely
and utterly


bruce covey said...

Thanks for writing your Reveal: Grocery store poem (below)--I really enjoyed it!

B Blue said...

Thanks for reading it. I read your work on No Tell Motel and felt very inspired.

bruce covey said...

wow--thanks--I'm glad I could be an inspiration. You should consider sending me some of your work for my new, web-based poetry journal Coconut (coconutpoetry dot org)